Thursday, September 5, 2013

Crabby shell

Crunchy as a cracker
It sounds like teeth scraping
It feels like climbing the rockpool
Super spikey

By Barnie

3 comments:

  1. 'Crunchy as a cracker'- a super simile and alliteration too Barnie. You are a writer!
    Mrs C

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  2. Awesome Barnie, good use of words, great writing.
    From Leith & Jo.

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  3. Awesome poem Barnie, nice use of words. From Bob the Builder.............can he fix it..................yes he can!

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